Today I took several of the sketches I did yesterday at the Telluride Talk and used them to rework the sketch I posted yesterday. My primary goal was to use scale to convey greater physical distance between the speaker and the audience. And I wanted to include some of the other audience members I sketched the evening before. While it looks to me like the speaker is no longer standing in the midst of the audience, I feel I lost clarity  by overdoing the inclusion of darks in the background.